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Rachel

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The Excuse by deviantshrimp, literature

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The Excuse

He’s into his destiny. He’s into philosophy. He’s into making epiphanies. He’s into dreams. He’s just lost his way is all. He’s into me. He’s into the chemistry. He’s into speed. He’s into anatomy. He’s into sciences and good deeds. You can trust my word. He’s into the scholarly. Recognition of such adorn the walls of his abode; a recognition hidden from many. It’s beautiful, though. You can have my word. No, he doesn’t go to parties. He’s not a people’s person. He’s not good at mingling. He doesn’t quite know how to mix his words. And he&rsq

The Afterlife. by deviantshrimp, literature

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The Afterlife.

This damned heat! Oh my god! In all my life I never thought that it’d be me between these sheets. You see? I’m a small girl with even smaller dreams. In all my life I’d never known that I’d have something of my own. But, to give it all away? Oh my god! This heat is something gross out a horror movie. I’d rather sloppy kiss than talk about the girl you’re still in love with. I thought you left your past behind? Is it something more this time? Do you regret this one mistake? The prompt went well. This kid is good. The excuse was hell. This love is gold.

The Prenuptial Agreement by deviantshrimp, literature

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The Prenuptial Agreement

Maxwell's mad. Rachel's always mad. This time's just like the last one, a fight that's to be had. And Max is always wrong. And Rae's always right. He'd apologize and they'd make up that night. And the world slowly turns around again. He takes the blame! He always takes the stinkin' blame! I can't even walk some two steps before he starts to call my name. See, he's always wrong. And I'm always right. It's sad that it's so, but the make up's pretty nice. To my surprise, the world turns around again. "Why do we fight? You know I hate it every night! It's just so hard to yell at something That looks at me real nice. I can al

Folks Fall in Love by deviantshrimp, literature

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Folks Fall in Love

You make me feel so tiny in a way that is serene. But you take me to a place, a special place I've never been. And yeah, love can take it's toll, but if you've ever loved someone, then you know all of the bad times always under-weigh the fun. You should never feel alone because you're not the only one. We were placed in a space between the earth and the sun. You can play rock 'n' roll but if you ever play someone, then you know that they can sing, have a beat, and be strummed. So yes, I really like you and I'm really, really tiny. Boy you're like a God. You're so big, you terrify me. You scare me so much that sometimes you make m

Maxwell's Golden Hammer by deviantshrimp, literature

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Maxwell's Golden Hammer

And since I'm done, I'll stick around and bury my dreams straight to the ground. And as for I? I kiss and cry. I love or die. Love me tonight. So close to home, his hand is wrung. It strikes her skin, her flesh, the bone. I ask, "Why? Leave me to die?" "Love me tonight!" Is there a reason to win? To keep this old heart's cold beat? Is there a reason to win? To keep this body from the sea? Lo! Sweet and low! I thank God for Maxwell's hand! Oh no! Lo! Behold! I thank God for making man!

November 23rd. August 16th. by deviantshrimp, literature

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November 23rd. August 16th.

You make a man out of me. You take the fun out of breathing. You take the fun out of being committed to our fucking plan. And I did my part to make this dream happen. A simple man with simple desire. You would not be the last. You would. You said we had a chance, that we'd see romance. God'll spread my bloody hands in the jaws of your beast. I promised to never fake it. What were you hoping for? A sense of passion and a set of skills. A sense of function from the core to the skin. You would not be the first. You would. You told me to never fake it. What were you hoping for? Sleep in. Keep out. So lost inside a messed

I'll Make It For Brunch by deviantshrimp, literature

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I'll Make It For Brunch

Another guy takes you in his arms. And east-side West-side Entire towns between us. I'd risk my life just for your one call Oh baby call, I swear I'll make it for brunch. Another guy sinks into your bed And lights on Lights off Your bed sheets are between us I'd risk my life just for your touch And your rough, I promise I won't make you cry Sound of your breath in the cold Sound of your voice when it's hoarse Sound of your feet through the door Zounds, your sound, J'adore!

Back Before Brunch by deviantshrimp, literature

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Back Before Brunch

Warm and dry Your calluses know what they're missing Then, there's I The chance that you're taking and risking And in the spring, you gave me this ring. You said, "See you soon. We'll marry in June." You left from the shore. I saw you no more. How I long for your touch. I love you so much. And in the spring, you gave me this ring. You said you'd be back before brunch. Now you're gone. No one to cook food while you're sleeping. Days are done You're phone don't just vibrate, it's beeping. And consequences that burn like the sun. And battles were lost. That war's just begun. You said, "See you soon. We will marry in June." Yet

All I Need by deviantshrimp, literature

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All I Need

There wasn't much I felt I need. Privileged to touch. A right to be. You don't carry guilt. I die inside. You've killed my soul. There goes my pride. There wasn't much I felt I need. Just a small touch. A right to breed. I carry all this guilt. You carry pride. You've killed my soul. Inside I've died. I don't care for amateur flings. I'm curious... What can you bring? Don't be shy because I ask. Just take me home and just relax. I don't care for status quo. I'll travel as far as you'll go. Don't be shy because I ask. Just take me home and just relax. We don't need to put a label on whatever the hell people say are. All I ask:

Alice by deviantshrimp, literature

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Alice

"I give myself very good advice but I very seldom follow it." We choose who to love but we have trouble. We choose who to love but we have trouble. We choose who to love but we have trouble. We choose who to love but we have trouble. There is a wrong way to love; the debt of the troubled. There is a wrong way to love; the debt of the troubled. There is a wrong way to love; the debt of the troubled. There is a wrong way to love; the debt of the troubled. There is a wrong way to love but you are troubled. The debt. There is a wrong way to love but you are troubled. The debt. There is a wrong way to love but you are troubled. The d

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The Excuse by deviantshrimp, literature

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The Afterlife. by deviantshrimp, literature

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The Afterlife.

The Prenuptial Agreement by deviantshrimp, literature

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The Prenuptial Agreement

Folks Fall in Love by deviantshrimp, literature

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Folks Fall in Love

Maxwell's Golden Hammer by deviantshrimp, literature

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Maxwell's Golden Hammer

November 23rd. August 16th. by deviantshrimp, literature

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November 23rd. August 16th.

I'll Make It For Brunch by deviantshrimp, literature

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I'll Make It For Brunch

Back Before Brunch by deviantshrimp, literature

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Back Before Brunch

All I Need by deviantshrimp, literature

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All I Need

Alice by deviantshrimp, literature

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Alice

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Both Our Forearms by deviantshrimp, literature

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Both Our Forearms

I have this beauty mark. I'm told it's your favourite. It's nothing special, but no one else pays any mind to it. Only you do. We can be weird like that. I don't know anyone else quite as adorable as we are. You have so many scars. Those are all hidden. But you don't mind showing them to me. Telling me each and every story which is different from the previous because your adventures are unique each time you set foot into them. That's why you earn your scars. To remember. I love your scars, especially the ones that came from me. From the time I bit you because you called me a bitch. And the time you drew blood because I liked y

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Artist // Student // Literature

Mar 28
United States
Deviant for 14 years
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I was born and raised in New York City. I'm not necessarily a cliche, but I don't try hard to be different. I guess I was just born that way? I love Lady Gaga, The Rocky Horror Picture Show, and everything in between the two (Which is mainly meat and Glee). I enjoy discussions on every topic and I don't mind who I'm discussing these topics with... My middle name is Sketchy, and I'm indifferent towards bananas.

Lots of Love and Rachel Destiny
-Rae

Current Residence: ny, NY
deviantWEAR sizing preference: small, i guess.
Print preference: BOLD!
Favourite genre of music: i dont subscribe my ears to one genre
Favourite photographer: Nigel Barker
Favourite style of art: any type
Operating System: PC!
MP3 player of choice: can't live without ma pod
Shell of choice: turtle
Wallpaper of choice: scooby doo purple
Skin of choice: mine?
Favourite cartoon character: too many to name (At the moment, Sterling Archer, Lana Kane, Finn, Marceline, Rainicorn, Shaggy)
Personal Quote: "Damn girl, it must be that fedora."

Favourite Visual Artist

All of my friends

Favourite Movies

The Rocky Horror Picture Show

Favourite TV Shows

Glee, TBBT, Jersey Shore(Shut up), The Office, SNL, The Hard Times of RJ Berger, My Life as Liz, Hung, True Blood, Devil May Cry, Adventure Time, Archer

Favourite Bands / Musical Artists

too many different genres, songs, and albums to choose from

Favourite Books

The Catcher in the Rye, Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets, Lolita, A Clockwork Orange, World War Z, About A Boy, Dracula, Hamlet

Favourite Writers

J.K. Rowling (All Time) J.D. Salinger (Close Second) Aside from these two I favor those who write teh goreys

Favourite Games

left 4 dead 2

Favourite Gaming Platform

pc vs. 360

Tools of the Trade

My right and left.... fists.... you probably though I was going to say boobs. Didn't you?

Other Interests

alot of unordinary stuff

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deviantshrimp

Oct 16, 2011

Screw Perfect, I Need Opinions.

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Hey all,    So I know I tried to wait until my vignettes (and a few songs) were ready enough to post. Dilemma? I'M NOT CONTENT WITH ANYTHING I WRITE ANYMORE!.. I have a few of some VERY nice vignettes I wrote... The more I wrote, the closer they started to tie in with each other...  Meep =/ Anywho, I am also currently writing another non-romantic (yay!) story. Apocalyptic like the other one I'm working on... Only this one I HAVE an actual outline for... As far the NAZI (Not. Another. Zombie. Invasion. and is no way relevant to zombies and takes place more so in the post-zombie-apocalyptic) story... Ehh... Short turned into long and long got

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deviantshrimp

Apr 21, 2011

This Time Baby I'll Be Bulletproof

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Hey Guys, So today... I submitted something! It's been the first in... a very long ass time! I'm not too sure why as I have been writing away with well, mostly songs, but a couple other short vignettes. Anywho, you haven't seen a lot of them yet because I keep rewriting and editing the ones I really like because I know they can get there before they come here. So yes. A lot has happened. I recently went to China. And it was alright for the most part. The expirience was really weird. You would think that was the reason I was writing a lot. Actually, that is not the case at all. As you may know, I'm a closet romantic so everything I've been wr

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deviantshrimp

Jan 6, 2011

Howdy! =D

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It's been quite a while and I was going through work. Evidentially, the longer the pieces, the better they do. I also realized my pieces that were also HW assignments for, like English or something, got a lot of recognition. So... The pieces with more written in then OR the pieces I worked far harder on get a lot more recognition. Go-fucking-figure. But on the bright side, I now know that: a. My writing style is appreciated ^.^ b. I should write things with more words in them... Tehe c. I should really post more brilliance... bonus: I should finish that zombie story. I've been writing again... Whoopie Love and More Coming to a DeviantAr